Wednesday 27 November 2013

Planning - Script (1st Draft)


"Catch a Convict"

Scene 1

We look upon the centre of one of the most secure prisons in Kent. The cold wind breezes along plain and dull surroundings as it threads through the rustling trees.

Scene 2

Inside this lonely, unforgiving prison cell we find sitting there: 'Juan Ball', the most dangerous of all prison. Serving 20 years into his life sentence for manslaughter, there's simply no escape for him as it's completely impossible to break free from this lonely security prison.

Juan Ball
Damn it! I'm never going to get out of here! I should have never turned to a life of crime.


Juan's shouting alerts the prison guard watching his cell; 'Rob Michaelson' who eyes Juan through the window of the cell door with a nerve-wrecking and horrifying expression.

GUARD MICHAELSON
Keep the noise down Ball! Or otherwise I'll have the warden extend your sentence for another 15 years! You're just going to have get used to life here, you 'God-forsaken' murderer!


Juan starts biting his nails trying to figure out a way to get out of the maximum security prison so he could forget about the murders he committed in the past and to start a new life.

Scene 5

As late afternoon falls, all is quiet in the prison. Juan looks around and quickly realises that the guards have gone to the office for their coffee break. He feels that he can easily escape, if only he had the keys for his cell. 

Juan Ball
Hmmm, this is perfect. With them quite a bit away from my cell, and that my cell is near the entrance, I can escape. But how? The cell door is locked. 


He sees just a few inches from the other side of the door, are the guard's keys. He finds a stick big enough to reach the keys so he can free himself.

Juan Ball
Yes! I can now finally escape this horrific and unwilling place. 

He eventually grabs the keys, opens the door and very quickly without noise makes his way for the exit, with hardly anyone seeing.

Scene 5

The sound of loud prison alarms erupt as the news of Juan Ball escaping the prison quickly spreads. 

Juan charges through the prison hallway doors on his way towards a certain freedom.

Guard Michaelson starts chasing after Ball, shouting at him loudly and shaking his fist. But gives up chasing as he therefore loses his breath.

GUARD MICHAELSON
Come back here Ball! You may have escaped. But I'll make sure that you're quickly back in your cell before you know it!

Scene 6

Juan Ball quickly makes his way out through the prison exit and rushes through the car park into the countryside.

Scene 7

Juan Ball
Phew! Oh good, a church. I can hide out here till the guards decide to call off the search, looking for me.


He opens the church doors and walks into the main church hall with the hope that he'll be safe from the prison guards.


Group Roles
James and Ollie: Worked on the script, developing ideas for what scene we would show in the opening, when it comes to filming.
James: Typed up the script and posted it to the blog.


Tuesday 26 November 2013

Planning - Pitch Feedback









Group Roles
We presented the pitch to the rest of the class, this was filmed during the presentation.
Ollie uploaded this to the blog.

Monday 25 November 2013

Planning - Equipment List

For our main task film we will use the following equipment:
·         Editing Software: ( Movie Maker For The Animatic), (Sony Vegas for the film opening)
·         Camera: HD CamCorder
·         Tripod
·         Computer System (To Do The Editing And Animatic Work On)
·         Props( “Jail”, Whistle, Guard Uniform, Prisoner Uniform, Smart Clothes Of Prisoners Brother, “Church”)

Group Roles
Ollie typed this up and uploaded it to the blog.

We both discussed what equipment will be used.

Planning - Action Plan

What has been done?
  • Initial Ideas.
  • Pitch.
  • 'Definitely, Maybe' Analysis x1
What needs to be done and when is it going to be done by?
  • Filming: Will start in two weeks and will be complete sometime, at the latest; the end of that particular week or sometime the week after that.
  • Original Pitch Feedback video: Tuesday/Wednesday (this week)
  • Script: Will be done by Friday.
  • Other 'Definitely, Maybe' Analysis: Done by Friday.
  • Institutional Research: Done by Friday.
  • Animatic: Sometime this week.
  • Shot schedule: Sometime at the beginning of next week.
  • Location shots: Sometime this week.
  • Equipment list: Today.
  • Call Sheet: This week or next week.
  • Budget: Next week or the week after.
  • Risk assessment: Probably next week or after filming.
  • Music: After Filming and editing the shots for the film, together.
Group Roles:
  • Cameraman: James/Ollie.
  • Initial Ideas: James.
  • Pitch: James.
  • 'Definitely, Maybe' Analysis: James and Ollie.
  • Original Pitch Feedback Video (Uploading): Ollie.
  • Script: James.
  • Institutional Research: James and Ollie.
  • Animatic: Ollie/James.
  • Shot list: James.
  • Shot schedule: James.
  • Equipment list: Ollie.
  • Location shots: Ollie.
  • Call sheet: James.
  • Budget: Ollie.
  • Risk assessment: ? 
  • Music: Both of us.

Group Roles
Ollie: Typed this up.
James: Uploaded the action plan to the blog.

Tuesday 19 November 2013

'Definitely, Maybe' Analysis


Film evaluation: Definitely, maybe (2 minute opening of the film)

Titles: From 0-22 seconds, the opening was taken up by an animated production; Universal. From 24-33 seconds, there’s another animated production company; Working Title. There was 2-3 seconds of dark screen, then coming up we have ‘universal pictures presents’ shown on the screen. We get another few seconds of dark screen and then at 39 seconds, images appear on the screen. At 46 seconds, ‘in association with studio canal’ appears on the screen, but with different size lettering for ‘studio canal’.  At 59 seconds, what is shown in the screen is ‘a working title production’ again with black and white and in different size lettering. Going from an image to a dark screen with titles is very common in film titles. The film is directed by Adam Brooks. At 1 minute 49 seconds, the title of the film appears on the screen. And then 1 minute 51 seconds, a comma slides into the title, pushing ‘maybe’ back a bit. The name of the star actor appears first at 1:54. At 1 minute 58 seconds, the name of actor 2 appears. At 2 minutes 3 seconds, actor 3 appears on the screen.  At 2:07, the name of actor 4 appears on the screen. At 2:12, the name of actor 5 appears on the screen. At 2:16, the name of actor 6 appears on the screen. At 2:32, the names of other actors appear on the screen. 2:37, the names of two more actors appear on the screen. 7 seconds later, the name of two more actors appear on the screen. At 2:54, ‘casting by’ is shown on the screen. At 3:03, the person who did the music appears. At 3:07, the name of the costume designer appears. AT 3:12, the name of the person who edited the film appears. At 3:18, the name of the production designer appears. At 3:23, the name of the director of photography appears on the screen. At 3:30, the name of the co-executive producer appears on the screen. At 3:34, the names of the executive producers appear on the screen. At 3:39, the name of which the film was produced by appears on the screen. At 3:43, the name of the writer and director appears on the screen. And then at 3:48, we go straight into the film. 

Sound: As the ‘Universal’ logo appears on the screen, we here their music at the start. A synchronous image is presented where we can hear sound in the background of the film, when the screen is still dark. We have the ambient sound of an office, and get foley sound of who’s going to speak first, in this case, a woman speaks because we can hear her high heals while walking in the office. For 2 seconds, we heard a secretary’s voice then immediately she says the name of the main character that we see first on the screen. The sound of the package hitting the desk was exaggerated meaning that it hit desk louder than it should’ve been suggesting that the package is important, it’s a big deal. Will clicking the pen continuously is another example of a foley sound. The sound of him throwing the pen onto the desk is an example of a foley recording. The rustling of him taking the papers out of the package is a diegetic sound meaning there’s no background sound. At 55 seconds, the main actor gives a narration (voice over) describing that he’s getting a divorce because that’s what the papers are about. The sound in the office (ambient sound) is presented by Will’s secretary speaking to him. Reffering to the main opening, we know quite a bit about the main character. Because of what his secretary has said to him, we hear that he’s got an advertising account, suggesting that he’s an advertising executive. From the next bit of his voice over, we can tell that he doesn’t like his job. He has a daughter, but he doesn’t get custody of her because as he’s not together with his wife, he gets to see his daughter a few times a week. He’s a nice person, a loving father because he loves Tuesdays and Fridays, because he gets to pick up his daughter and gets to see her. He being a nice guy makes him attractive to the audience. When he puts in his earphones, the sound in the background decreases. We go from an ambient sound in the office to the ambient sound of a busy street. He introduces the music he’s going to listen to as voice over, he hears diegetic music which weird because mostly in films, women usually hear it in their heads. He plays the wrong song, it stops then the ambient street sound returns. He then returns to voice over and plays the other song, the song that suits his mood. The choice of song for the opening credits creates a happy mood for himself, despite the fact he’s getting divorced. He’s presented a likeable person, someone who sees a peaceful and happy side of life.

Mise-en-Scene: The envelope we see on the desk at the start creates an enigma, suggesting what we think is going to be in the envelope. The envelope we see is one that is usually used by lawyers and businesses. It could be about business, because there’s a lawyer’s or business name on the top left corner of the envelope. In the background, the ‘quaker’ logo appears which suggests that it’s an item which he’s going to promote/advertise. The suit he’s wearing is smart clothing, suggesting that he works for a business. The laptop on his desk shows that his work is all done on a laptop. We see the divorce papers (a printed document) titled ‘Judgement of Divorce’ which includes the name of his wife; Sarah Hayes (the person who’s divorcing him). The fact of him having his own office, suggests that he’s an important person in the advertising agency he works for. There’s a formal relationship between Will and his secretary because she informs him of any important business work. He doesn’t seem to be that bothered about the advertising account because he’s just received his divorce papers. One part of the opening of the film shows a shot from a different angle of most of the office so you can see the environment outside the office. Sunlight is featured in this shot, lighting up the atmosphere which lights up Will’s moods and feelings. His office is near a busy road congested with traffic suggesting that New York which is where his office is, the roads in that city are always busy with traffic. The earphones he uses to listen to music are another prop which is shown in this scene. Having his tie loose, not tightened suggests that he’s just finished work. Another prop shown is his mobile phone which he is using to play music. The regular New York taxis which are yellow are featured in another scene when he’s crossing the road. Another iconic representation of New York that we get in the film is the ‘Chrysler Building’. Grand Central Subway Station is also shown in the opening credits. As soon as he walks from his business environment, we see more people smartly dressed and also students. Street sellers are also featured in the opening credits. Someone travelling on their scooter is featured which suggests that it’s something unusual in the streets of New York.

Editing: Earlier on in the film, we have some editing that’s been cut so there’s a short scene which cuts back to dark screen titles. Then we have some cutting between a prop and the reaction of the person that has or is using that prop. In terms of combination, within over a minute of the opening of the film, we get a shot reverse shot which shows one character then another character then the camera moves back to the first character shown. In terms of editing, this shot has gone from interior (inside) to exterior (outside) with a simple cut. It was a long shot (take) of Will walking out of the office and then walking towards the camera. Another shot reverse shot is shown when he’s holding his phone, the camera then shows his face; close up then again shows him holding his phone. At 1:40, the shot goes into split screen showing two different shots of Will from different angles and distances. The same shot also went into slow motion. At 1:47, the shot moves into different frames moving across the screen like a slide show. Then we have the same shot from different angles and distances. In the early part of the film, just after the beginning, in terms of editing there’s a sense of continuity which suggests his facial expression. The transitions between shots are simply straight cuts, one shot splitting into other different shots. At 2:00, the sliding frames on the split screen is another editing technique used in the opening credits, match on action is also featured earlier on in the film.

Camerawork: In this scene, the envelope is made the centre of attention, which suggests importance. It’s shown with a close up shot of it. A medium close up shot of Will is shown at a wide angle showing the surroundings in the background. A tilt up of the camera is shown as one shot showing the envelope then the camera tilts up towards Will’s face with more of a medium close up shot. A point of view shot is when the camera looks straight at the characters’ eyes to get a sense of what he’s looking at, then the camera pushes in to show what he’s actually looking at which is the paperwork which was in the envelope. A medium close up shot is shown of his secretary so we get a sense of her reaction but also an eye-line match so we know who she is looking straight towards to. A reaction shot is used showing what his reaction is and how he’s feeling after his secretary speaks to him. A master shot is used showing a medium close up shot of Will with the surroundings in the background. A wide shot is used again showing Will, but showing more of the background from a wider angle. The camera then does a pan shot showing him walking out of the doors of the building he works in. The arrangement of this frame allows us to see more of the building, the street and the other surroundings. As he walks closer towards the camera, the camera moves backwards away from him to show the surroundings in the background, but Will follows the camera quicker than the camera moves away from him to fill the frame in more. The camera shows his right hand side, then arks around him to show his left hand side. He’s then shot at a low angle. Then we got to an extreme close up of his hand holding his phone. Then we got to a low angle shot showing an extreme close up shot of him. Shot reverse shot is used which the camera goes back to an extreme close up shot of his phone. Then we go back to an over shoulder shot of him as the film goes straight into the opening credits. In the opening two minutes of the film, we saw quite a few different close up shots, some of them used more than once mostly showing the main character. 

Planning - Main Task


Main Task: Initial ideas

Genre:
·        The Day, The Life of Sixth Form:  Mystery Film.
·        Catch a Convict: Prison Drama.

Theme/Setting:
·        The Day, The Life of Sixth Form: Sixth Form Centre/Inside
                                                            Technology block (Room: T13)

·        Catch a Convict: L Block (English Department Floor), one of the class         
      rooms being used as a prison cell.                         
Assembly Hall (Church)

Characters:
·        The Day, The Life of Sixth Form: Sixth Former.
                                                            Mystery Figure.

·        Catch a Convict: Escape Convict.
                                Prison Guard.
                                Escape Convict’s brother.

Plots:
·        The Day, The Life of Sixth Form:
A Howard School Sixth Former heads towards and walks into the Sixth Form Centre during one of his free study periods to finish off some coursework. But once he enters one of the study rooms, he unexpectedly finds a not onto a yellow bit of paper stuck on the nearest computer to the door saying ‘Meet me at T13 in 5 minutes’. Once he reads it, he looks really surprised. He then gets a phone call from a mystery figure with a really low voice. This person says to the Sixth Former: “Who do you think you’re dealing with?! Don’t think I know you.” He turns his phone off and heads off to T13 to meet the person who wrote the message. Once he enters T13, he unexpectedly finds no one there.

·        Catch a Convict:
      A lethal prisoner who's guilty of manslaughter has escaped a life sentence from a maximum security prison. Once he escapes, he therefore goes on the run, desperate to find his long lost brother because his brother is the only other member left of his family because the rest of their family have been dead for several years. He decides to hide out in local church, but when he enters, he unexpectedly finds his brother praying not knowing that his brother was Catholic. For the first time in 20 years, he speaks to his brother telling him what has happened and why he's found him. He then begs and asks for his brother if he can work at his brother's company producing road tyres. His brother agrees to give him a job. When the convict eventually settles into his new job, relatives of people that the convict has killed in the past start to come after him wanting him out of the city.



Roles
We both worked on this together.
James uploaded it.
Ollie checked and corrected any problems.

Monday 18 November 2013

Planning - Pitch


Main Task: Pitch

Task: 2 minute opening to a film.

Title: Catch a Convict.

Genre: Drama (Prison Film)

Locations: L Block (3rd Floor): Prison. Car park near the P.E. Block. Basketball courts. School grounds.

Time Period: During the day (school day)

Characters: Escape Convict, Prison Guard, Escape Convict's Brother.

Plot Outline: A lethal prisoner who's guilty of manslaughter has escaped a life sentence from a maximum security prison. Once he escapes, he therefore goes on the run, desperate to find his long lost brother because his brother is the only other member left of his family because the rest of their family have been dead for several years. He decides to hide out in local church, but when he enters, he unexpectedly finds his brother praying not knowing that his brother was Catholic. For the first time in 20 years, he speaks to his brother telling him what has happened and why he's found him. He then begs and asks for his brother if he can work at his brother's company producing road tyres. His brother agrees to give him a job. When the convict eventually settles into his new job, relatives of people that the convict has killed in the past start to come after him wanting him out of the city.

Target Audience: Ages 15 and over.
                               Anybody who likes prison drama's.

Mise en scene: Escape Convict: Prisoner's uniform.
                           Prison/Security Guard: Security Guard Uniform.
                           Escape Convict's brother: Coat, work tie, shirt, work trousers, smart shoes.
                           Seating in the Church (Assembly Hall)
                           Classroom: Being used as the prison cell, that the convict breaks out from.
                           Assembly Hall: Being used as the church which the convict finds his brother.
                           Whistle: Used by the prison guard at the escaped prisoner to alert the
                           escape

Camerawork: Establishing shot: To show the prison that the prisoner is held in.
                         Tilt up shot: To show the prisoner breaking free from the prison and to show
                         the convict entering the church.
                         Medium close up shot: To show the emotions of the prisoner when he breaks
                         out of prison. To show the emotions of the convict's brother when he looks at 
                         him with amazement after calling his name.
                         Crab shot: This can be shown when the convict walks towards his brother.
                         Close up shot: To show the convict getting the sense of freedom and a new
                         future when he escapes from prison.
                         Also to show the reaction of the prison guards' emotions while blowing his
                         whistle at the escaped prisoner.
                         Shot reverse shot: To show him walking in the church and then with his 
                         brother.
                         Match on Action: Shows him and his brother walking out of the church.

Music: Dramatic theme music (copyright free)



Roles
We worked on this together
James uploaded this
Ollie checked and updated the post.